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Annoying non-clients [Mar. 18th, 2024|10:11 pm]
Tim Lieder
So I went back and forth with this crazy woman and it looked like she wanted me to write her entire paper for her, but then she only needed me to write an introduction.

She said 5000 words. I assumed she meant 500 words. I quoted $50

Then she said she needed 1500 words so obviously I increased the price.

Then she went back to 500 words and I said "yes, ok if it's only 500 words, $50"

And then she sent nasty emails telling me that I was a scammer.

So that's fun.

I'm posting her email because she wouldn't fucking stop.

I can post more emails.

Apparently she's also a tattoo model.

Ugly fucking tattoos. I guess this degree is when that fails and she has to go into the restaurant business or whatever.

[Also, I fucking hate freelancing. I've been doing it since 2008 and the sense of entitlement due to these fuckers using ChatGPT and thinking that I should charge starvation wages is fucking ridiculous. I need a real writing job. Real blog over at Dreamwidth and Tumblr]

Katrina Stylez

From:
katrina.stylez@gmail.com
To:
Tim Lieder

Mon, Mar 18 at 9:21 PM

Tim,

You changed your font way too many times for my liking. If you would had been more CONSISTENT maybe you could SCAM more college students but instead you’re using an AI generator and MISSPELLED simple words such as CONFIRM!

FYL: Just because you have link attachments on every single email that doesn’t make you APPEAR as if you’re a legit person.

One 1 thing: NOBODY USES YAHOO AS A REAL EMAIL WHEN CONDUCTING BUSINESS IN 2024!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

This is what you like to do to people online? Expose students if you don’t get paid?
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You know the drill. College professors take note [Feb. 28th, 2024|09:21 am]
Tim Lieder
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I was hired by Jared Gonzalez
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jared gonzalez

From:
jaredgonz1999@yahoo.com
To:
omanlieder@yahoo.com

Fri, Feb 23 at 5:08 PM


Hi. I find your email in this app called Reddit I was wondering if you are available to do a paper work for me? Thank you

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jared gonzalez hires people to write his term papers. He couldn't pay for his own paper so I post his paper. So jared gonzalez hires people to write his term papers and if you have a student named jared gonzalez then you know that he engages in plagiarism. I wrote this paper for jared gonzalez and jared gonzalez is not paying me. I really wish that jared gonzalez because I'd rather have jared gonzalez's money than his academic career.

But maybe jared gonzalez shouldn't go to college if he can't write his own damn papers. I mean I have plenty of clients who can't write their own damn papers, but they are smart enough to actually pay me.

jared gonzalez is a deadbeat.



If this looks familiar its because i wrote it. One of your students hired me to write it.

Your student also didnt pay me.


Introduction
Applied Behavior Analysis is a form of behavioral engineering theoretically meant to improve social skills and normalize behavior with many different attempts to use stimuli and punishment. The original name for ABA was behavior modification. In recent years, it has come under attack by members of the Autistic Spectrum Community who claim that it is an abusive attempt to force “normal” behavior. Still there are several ways that ABA can be applied.

Features
There are several features of ABA. ABA is based on the concept that by recognizing and working on certain behaviors, the individual can better fit into the societal expectation. A parent or a therapist may “choose specific behaviors to work on, set clear goals, and use consistent rewards and positive methods to encourage good behavior and discourage challenging ones during daily activities.” (Tatom) ABA is basically psychotherapy and pedagogy as it seeks to teach children, mostly autistic children to “act normally,” with behaviors that don't make people uncomfortable.
ABA is also used for children with behavioral issues, phobias, and addictions. A great deal of ABA involves reward and punishment. However, ABA also “seeks to understand why someone behaves in a certain manner so that more effective solutions can be created. It is also important to note that while reinforcement and consequences are part of ABA therapy, they should be used responsibly” (Elias 2023).
ABA is mostly concerned with unwanted behavior but also seeks to encourage people to complete tasks. For example, one of the goals for autistic children may involve making eye contact. So the ABA would work on that eye contact. ABA would also make an effort to understand why neurodivergent individuals do not want to make eye contact, find eye contact creepy, state that they don't believe in premarital eye contact in a way that doesn't necessarily sound like they are joking. Maybe then they can make eye contact with greater ease.
Many believe that ABA is an effective treatment for ASD to help ASD students into the mainstream of the school curriculum. “School-based practitioners should aim to implement evidence-based behavior management strategies that have been proven to be effective for students with ASD. A robust literature base supports the use of many approaches, including applied behavior analysis” (White 2014, p. 85)

Three Pillars of ABA
The three pillars of ABA are stimulus, behavior and response. A stimulus can be negative or positive. When one is treating someone using ABA, stimulus, one can use negative stimuli like electric shock in order to provide a stimulus that keeps someone away. Or one can have an associative stimuli such as Pavlov's Dog salivating upon hearing a bell ring.
Stimulus was parodied in the South Park movie where Cartman was given a device that administered an electric shock every time he used profanity. By the end of the movie he had used so much profanity that he was able to shoot lightning bolts. This is not how stimulus works in ABA therapy but it is a popular conception and it can illustrate the debate over stiumuls.
Behavior is the key to ABA. With ABA, the individual is being trained to behave in a certain way and this behavior is being moved in one direction by response and stimuli.
Response is the way that ABA controls people. You say a word. Someone hits you on the hand. That's the response. Your stimuli is negative.
Another example of stimuli, response and behavior is daily report cards (DRC). “The DRC is an operationalized list of a child’s target behaviors (e.g., interrupting, noncompliance, academic productivity), and it includes specific criteria for meeting each behavioral goal (e.g., “interrupts three or fewer times during math instruction”). Teachers provide immediate feedback to the child regarding target behaviors on the DRC.” (Pyle & Fabiano 2017). The behavior is the type of behavior shown by the child with ADHD. The response is the report card. The stimulus is the reward or punishment in regards to the DRC.

Classical vs. Operant Conditioning
Stimuli and responses are the way that ABA conditions the patients. Also conditioning is something that happens throughout our daily lives. Our mothers scream at us to do the dishes and we do the dishes and this is a type of conditioning. We grow up reading sexist books that depict men and women in some kind of blood feud for supremacy and this affects our attitude toward dating. Other types of conditioning can occur in regards to sitmuli. If you eat pasta and throw up, you might feel nauseous when you are served pasta again. This is regardless of whether the first pasta dish that made you vomit was spoiled.
Pavlov's dog is the quintessential example of classical conditioning. The dog associated the bell with food and salivated when hearing the bell. If a child is exposed to a dog that bites the child, the child may associate barking with danger.
Operant conditioning is a more important part of conditioning. With operant conditioning, the person being conditioned is encouraged to actively participate in their conditioning. “Operant conditioning may be more obvious since the consequences and reinforcement are apparent. Classical conditioning can be more insidious or unknown.”(Arzt & Fuller 2023).
An example of operant conditioning happens in brainwashing, such as with Mao's army where every member was supposed to confess to their sins and to the sins of their comrades. Those who resisted the conditioning were pushed out of the group and needed to find other things to do. Those who remained in Mao's army kept confessing their sins and their comrade's sins so much that they were completely under the thrall of the party. They didn't contribute anything but their obedience. Later Maoist purges such as the Great Leap Forward and the Cultural Revolution would continue this conditioning with younger party members turning in their older comrades for being counterrevolutionaries and spies.
Reinforcement
Reinforcement is an important part of life. We all reinforce our behaviors on a daily basis. We brush our teeth in the morning if he want to have fresh breath and save money on dentists. Setting an alarm is a type of reinforcement. Negative reinforcement means that you are putting something off.
Exercise can be both positive and negative reinforcement. It's negative because you are trying to lose weight and put off the death that awaits for just a little longer. If you exercise regularly, you are less likely to die of a heart attack or develop diabetes. However, it is also positive because it gets the blood pumping and the endorphins going.
If you are not likely to exercise, you can use more reinforcement such as music so you are dancing on the treadmill or television so that you can catch upon your favorite anime. This is always personal and part of the program.
Ideally reinforcement should be personal. One of the issues with neurodivergence is that reinforcement is not as easy. With ADHD or ASD, one has to remind oneself to do all the things every day and even use other forms of reinforcement.

Schedules of Reinforcement
Schedules of reinforcement are tools used for neurodivergent people to schedule their time and their activities so that they are getting key goals addressed. Someone with ADHD might need fixed intervals of reinforcement to make sure that they do certain things. They can set alarms and also set aside time for busy work. There are also ways of tokens that help people to understand themselves.

Conclusion
Even though there are ABA critics who note that ABA might be used to force people into artificial normalcy, there are some benefits to ABA. ABA does help people to condition themselves into dealing with responsibilities and social interactions. Furthermore, ABA will allow people to schedule their time in a comprehensive manner.




References
Arzt N &Fuller K. (2023). Classical vs. operant conditioning: What is the difference? Choosing Therapy. Retrieved from https://www.choosingtherapy.com/classical-vs-operant-conditioning/

Elias M (2023) Is ABA therapy only for autism? Six myths. Discovery ABA Therapy. Retrieved from https://www.discoveryaba.com/aba-therapy/myths

Pyle K & Fabiano G.A. (2017) Daily report card intervention and attention deficit hyperactivity disorder: A meta-analysis of single-case studies. Exceptional Children 83(4). 378-395. DOI: 10.1177/0014402917706370


Tatom C. (2023) The 7 dimensions and core principles of ABA. Autism Parenting Magazine. Retrieved from https://www.autismparentingmagazine.com/aba-principles/

White, S. E. (2014). Special Education Complaints Filed by Parents of Students With Autism Spectrum Disorders in the Midwestern United States. Focus on Autism and Other Developmental Disabilities, 29(2), 80-87. https://doi.org/10.1177/1088357613478830
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Books Read in 2021 # 77-80 - I got to take these back to the lirbary [Dec. 21st, 2021|02:25 pm]
Tim Lieder
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77.The White Snake by Ben Nadler - I actually thought this was going to be the other White Snake legend, the Chinese one. Instead it's the Grimm Brothers. In this case the white snake is dead and eating the white snake helps the protagonist hear birds and fish and the like. It's a standard story of a peasant who becomes king because he has magic powers. The author purposefully made the princess into a smart character who can run things better. The illustrations are great but I don't recognize the style. Or I recognize that it is a particular style but I don't know which one.

78.Park Bench by Chaboute - This one starts slowly and I was not on board but when I finally got into it I had to go back and read it again. The characters keep coming back to the park bench and you see them unravel or move forward. THere's a business man who walks past it until one day he sits down and takes off his shoes. THere's a homeless man who keeps getting run off by police officers. There are lovers and skate punks and people just there to read. The ending where bench gets replaced by a bullshit hostile architecture bench is actually pretty heartbreaking.

79 & 80. Jupiter's Legacy vol 1 & 2 by Mark Millar & Wilfredo Torres - So the deconstruction of superheroes continues but with them back in the 50s dealing with government interference and the FBI is just not as much of a hook as the original series. It's great to see that one character is gay and the team backs him up to the point that Skyfox blackmails J. Edgar Hoover. And Skyfox doesn't so much turn villain as has a fight with Walter. Walter is the villain of the original series and he's the villain in this one as well but he's more manipulative than outright evil. Skyfox does not so much turn bad as gets driven out by Walter and then when they almost reconcile, Walter drives him out again. Also Skyfox cares more about racial tensions and the underdog so his heel turn is actually a reevaluation of the white supremacist time period. In other words, he's really not a villain.

ANyhow the hook of the children having to grow up is not here. So it feels more like a Watchmen clone. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 76 - Cordwainer Smith is the Golden Age of Science Fiction [Dec. 21st, 2021|01:35 pm]
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76. Norstrilla by Cordwainer Smith - I don't know if it started when I was reading comics with crossover events or if it came later but I absolutely LOVE when stories and novels interconnect. From Balzac to Love & Rockets, I'm a sucker for characters showing up in other stories and being recontextualized. So Balzac's most clever villain is a mephisto character in one book, a rather pathetic but still manipulative guy in Pierre Goriot and a walk-on character who helps a character meet a poisoner in Cousin Bette. I'm currently working on a series of stories that take place in the near future, based on the book of Genesis where I keep killing off Dayton, Ohio.

So Cordwainer Smith is definitely in that wheelhouse. I read his short stories last year or the year before and I was shocked by how progressive he was for a Golden Age science fiction writer. Having read so much Heinlein and Asimov, I'm always certain that I'm going to have to deal with casual sexism and racism when I'm reading from that era. Instead I found some truly wonderful and imaginative stories with compelling women characters. When I finally wrote about him I ended up writing a revisionist history take https://timlieder1.medium.com/science-fiction-has-always-been-greater-than-campbell-82ccb66ecd70 where I celebrated the Golden Age writers outside the Campbell bubble.

However, one problem with the connected stories is the way that you read them feeling like you missed something. That actually is a bigger problem with novels like this one where Smith includes references to his other work including C'Mell, the Littul Kittens and the Lady of Clown Town to the point where you want to look up these other stories and see what you missed. Mostly it's just context, but I completely forgot about the Littul Kittens story which is actually about Norstrilla's security system. The fact that they reference it without saying anything else made me go "Oh yeah, I kind of remember that story but not really".

The novel is pretty straightforward. A resident of Norstrilla - an extremely wealthy but purposefully rustic planet because it's the only place that makes immortality juice - is an outcast because his telepathy isn't developed and he's on his last chance not to get killed as useless. Barely surviving that trial, he finds out that another person is trying to kill him so he uses his super computer to become extremely wealthy by manipulating the market. And buy the planet Earth.

The book is basically a travelogue of the world building of Smith. He takes you from Nostrilla to Earth to the underground of Earth where the animal people live. He introduces you to the characters that he'd develop more fully in other books. And finally he creates a post-capitalist society.

This isn't as great as his short stories but it's a decent introduction. I don't know if you should read it first or last. I guess reading it after reading the collection is not a bad idea. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 71-75 - Ok, let's just get this over with. [Dec. 21st, 2021|10:33 am]
Tim Lieder
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71. The Last Days of Ptolemy Grey by Walter Mosley - It's the end of the year when what began as a fun experiment turns into a chore. Of course, the fact that my clients are coming out of the woodwork to give me way more work than I can handle (but I handle it. I handle it) really pushes this one to the backburner. And the really insightful reviews that I was striving for in January fall by the wayside. Now it seems like I'm rushing to catch up as this will be the first year since I started this experiment where I've read fewer than 100 books. I could blame that on the door stop that is The Decline and Fall of the Roman Empire but also I really got caught up in Toon Blast. Damn pattern based games hit me right in the ADHD. I would blame them if it mattered how many books I've read but I'm an adult and no one is grading me on this thing (and besides I count graphic novels which don't take that long to read).

So this book - beautiful prose. Excellent prose. Ptolemy Grey is a scared old man with dementia who keeps getting mugged by the local wino, a character who gets steadily more pathetic as various family members threaten and beat on her. Mosley is doing some great work with dementia and memory with his historical fiction bona fides firing away. The plot of Grey getting his memory back complete is little more than a device to explore how memory works and the man's story from coming up from the south and his cousin robbing the local white family (and getting murdered for his troubles).

The book seems to be going in a standard place and I'm not entirely believing the fact that the young woman that starts taking care of Grey is doing it for no other reason than she loves him. That relationship is a little too good to be true. Like maybe if she had a back story where she had to take care of others first. Still the journey to the ending and the kindness in some characters really helps to make the journey work.

It reminds me of RL's Dreams which was he described as a prose poem about Robert Johnson. Only I didn't understand that one as much because it remained in the skewed perspectives. Funny thing is I think I might like RL's Dreams better now. Anyhow, not one of his best works, but still pretty great.

72. Aliens Labyrinth by Jim Woodring and Killian Plunket - I remember there was a very clever twist in this book about what the mad scientist was doing with the aliens. Like he was figuring out a way to control them or he was trying to make hybrids. It was really cool. When I read it. It made the fact that it ends with a simple chase and fight disappointing.

73. Marvel Zombies vs. Army of Darkness by John Layman & Fabiano Neves - How many of these fucking Marvel Zombie books did they make? A ton apparently because they are bringing in the Evil Dead franchise. Ok. I'm being a little cranky and I really shouldn't be cranky because I genuinely liked this book. Ash wisecracking among the zombies has proven to be a formula that works. Dr. Doom is really getting upgraded these days. Hulk promising to use the Book of the Dead as toilet paper- ok that made me smile. So this is a book that I don't even remember now. I suspect that if I pick it up in a few years I won't even remember that I read it.

74.The Joker War by James Tyrion IV and Various - Fuck this book. It wastes a bunch of characters and made for boring reading in the related titles. It's got some value as the movie theater full of Joker victims makes for a creepy image, but there's nothing new. This is just "Batman loses all his resources and needs to figure out how to fight without his toys" and that's been told. Granted, there's a lot about his Bat Family (I still remember in the 80s when killing off Jason Todd was a big deal because Batman should be a lone wolf. And Batgirl gets crippled for life. But then he gets a Robin. And Jason Todd comes back. And Batgirl gets better but by that time her role as Oracle became more important so it's a little bit of a betrayal).

Anyhow I'm not so angry because of this thing being egregiously bad but it promised just enough to disappoint. And it also seems like there are missing chapters.

75. Epic Collection: Powerman & Ironfist by John Byrne et al. - Ok. Time to lower one's expectations. We are going into the Bronze Age of comics. Many classics came out of this era but like with Golden Age Science Fiction, for the most part you have to give them some benefit of the doubt. For example, these were written to be single issues that people bought every month. Sometimes they missed a month. Other times they bought comics at random because comics were actually affordable at the time ($5 for a single issue!!!???? Fuck you Marvel. Even $2.99 is ridiculous. You fuckers aren't even making money with these comics so why jack up the prices so much. The comic books exist for the billion dollar movie industry to retain copyright). So almost every issue needed to stop the action in order to tell everyone what they missed. Out of the 22 page comic at least 2 pages are devoted to "Luke Cage was in prison and they gave him the formula" or the past couple issues. I used to call it "Writing the Marvel Comics way" especially when I read the first three Left Behind books and got annoyed with them repeating plot points every 100 pages or so. Like the same book.

So given that caveat, these books are pretty good. Had I been reading comic books in the 1970s I would have loved them. They even included the joke about Luke Cage having to buy new shirts from the same tailor all the time. Complete with the punchline of Dr. Banner showing up for his order of purple pants. I was impressed with how much the stories were part of 1970s New York with characters based on the figures that were discussed in American Gangster. Oh sure, these crime bosses had robot armies but it was still grounded in that local scene that made Luke Cage and Iron Fist so great for Netflix tv shows.

Not perfect but definitely a fun read. The only problem I have is that it is too long and the Marvel writing style does get tiresome. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Preview of a very boring blog post [Nov. 18th, 2021|05:22 pm]
Tim Lieder
So another client is hesitant to pay. I spent the last two days writing her homework for her education class and even though she knew that it was much longer than anything she has ever sent me, she thinks that $225 is too much. That was the last I heard from her.

I gave her the option to pay $125 now and the rest next week. I haven't heard from her.

So if I don't get paid or at least a promise to pay by tomorrow morning (24 hours after the last correspondence) I'm posting a very long homework assignment and naming the person who hired me.

6-evaluation-for-boricua
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Books read in 2021 # 66-70 - A stack of comic books [Nov. 7th, 2021|09:18 pm]
Tim Lieder
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66. Paper Girls 2 by Brian K Vaughan and Cliff Chiang - I think this book is starting to lose its focus. Brian K. Vaughan may be the Robert Altman of comic books for me where I have no middle ground with his work. Either love or hate. I love Saga and I really can't see the point to Y the Last Man. So what works in this comic is Erin Tieng talking to herself from 25 years in the future/past with the adult Erin annoyed by her teenage self as teenager Erin tells her not to swear and openly shows horror at the fact that her adult self takes pills for anxiety. That's a beautiful story buried in a lot of time travel war stuff that is confusing and annoying. Vaughan wrote Lost right? This reminds me of the way that Lost got lost in its own mythology. I guess it can improve. I will probably read the next one. But it needs more character and way less time travel bullshit.

67. Jupiter's Legacy 2 (or 4) by Mark Millar & Frank Quitely - So here's the battle where the "villains" fight the "heroes" and everyone deals with their fathers, especially the one without powers finding out that his dad is still alive. There's more action and less character building than the previous chapter but it's all good. I love the cleverness of the characters and Chloe's arc from party girl to responsible mother and fighter for all humanity against the egotists in her family is still great. Since I'm reading the prequel series, I'm looking for Blue Bolt clues in this one but besides the main guy getting his teleportation stick.

68. Invisible Kingdom: Walking the Path by G. Willow Wilson & Christian Ward - So this one looks great so good for you Christian Ward but the story isn't grabbing me. A nun finds out that her mother superior is making deals and is horrified which is weird because where does she think all the security and resources come from. So she teams up with a ship captain. It all takes a long way to get there. This is disappointing because I really liked Ms Marvel. But you know Wilson wants to do different things and they can't all be great. And I'm sure this has fans. I'm not one of them.

69.I Only Have Eye for You by Heather Nuhfer & Kellee Riley - Ok, why do I find Japanese romance comics cute and love stories in superhero comics adorable and yet this thing isn't hitting that spot. I know it wants to be cute and I guess maybe that's why it doesn't hit so hard for me. I like this one but it just never seemed to hit the same way. It's a high school full of monsters and they are all trying to hook up to go to the dance. They have problems. But these problems ultimately turn out to be advantages.

70.Lover Boys by Gilbert Hernandez - I think that this will ultimately become tied into the rest of the Love & Rockets series, like maybe a movie starring one of the characters. But it seems like Gilbert's best work with a teacher seducing various guys in the town while the kids are trying to dynamite things. I like this one but it's too familiar without feeling essential. The light storytelling that turns very dark with suicides and explosions and people getting each other pregnant and running off. But I've seen this before and better. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 63-65 - Japanese Literature [Nov. 7th, 2021|08:23 pm]
Tim Lieder
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63.The Pillow Book by Sei Shonagon - I'm really not sure why all of a sudden I'm reading Japanese books. In translation of course. I did decide to make the pre-determined shelf all Asian women (it was already all women) when I put The Tale of the Genji on the thing. I'm also finally reading Tale of the Genji so it's Hsien Era Japan. Or maybe I just love this book so much and I want it to keep going. I mean I am reading Tale of the Genji and a book about The Pillow Book.

This is the second time I've read this book and it's still a beautiful world where everyone can trade lovers and share poetry. Sure, if I was living in 10th century Japan I seriously doubt I would be in the royal entourage and I might have hated them just the same as I hate rich people in this era, but there's something so wonderful in this lifestyle, the same kind of feeling others get from Jeeves & Wooster or even Jane Austen. The lifestyle is so elegant and so foreign that reading these books feels like inhabiting these better more fun worlds for just a little time. Sei Shonagon is still just as snobbish and nasty as when I first read her, but I find more to love this time. She's also charming and working within this milieu. Her humor and sarcasm are matched with a passion for this world. In a century it's all going to collapse but that doesn't mean she ever has to worry. It's a sweet book that I hope to read many more times.

64.Sensor by Junji Ito - The last Junji Ito book I read was Lovesickness which could be the most Junji Ito of Junji Ito books. Like if someone asked what Junji Ito is like this would be the book to give them. It has the disgusting imagery, the desperation, the humor and the cruelty. Everyone is obsessed and obsessive and the picture of the decaying ghost girl screaming "LOVE MEEEEE!!!!" is both horrifying and hilarious. It's the kind of book that Junji Ito could whip out and still get results.

By contrast, this book is not that kind of book. It reminds me of the movie Silence, which might just because the whole Christian Martyrs in Japan plot but there's also a serious meditation on good and evil as the heroes try to run away from the insurmountable. A woman wanders into a village that's covered in golden hair that makes everyone see things. A volcano erupts and she's the only survivor. Her hair turns gold and then the protagonist turns to a reporter that treats her like a mystery and a savior. At least twice she faces death for the sins of others. This is not the usual Junji Ito fare and it's all the more glorious for its novelty.

65.Komi Can't Communicate vol 4 by Tomohito Oda - Komi and Tadano gave each other key chains!!! It's so damn cute. The rest of this is Komi competing in sports and being embarrassed. There's a little more of the "Komi as others see her/Komi as she is" with the outsiders seeing her as an impossible beauty while she's a bundle of nerves, but the growth of her and Tadano's relationship is still one of those romances that is impossible not to love. Also love the scene where they learn each other's first names but it's way too intimate for them to really use them. Formal vs. Informal address is more of a cultural thing but I do wish that there was more formality over here. I hate being called Tim by complete strangers. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books Read in 2021 # 61 & 62 - Damn good books. That's more like it. [Nov. 7th, 2021|07:24 pm]
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61. Balthazar by Lawrence Durrell - I haven't been updating these reviews for a month. I just let them pile up. I was going to just title this entry that's more like it because I finished reading this book after that fucking antisemitic piece of shit by Eleanor Davis, asshole Nazi, the kind of shitty writing who conflates the IDF with the Nazis because lazy. Oh yeah. I seriously hated that fucking book. But this isn't about that graphic novel. This is about two really good books that made me a little less disgusted.

I didn't read the first book in this series but that seems ok. I'm going to read it soon. These books are taking place concurrently, playing with different perspectives. So I get the gist that the first book is about a love affair that ended and this book is about telling the narrator that he was never the intended lover, that Julia always loved the other guy, the one that killed himself. Much like Robertson Davies, I don't remember much of these books when they are over. I love the style. I love the way he writes but everything feels so immediate that once I've finished reading them, i think I've woken from a dream that I want to go back to. I may have to read this series a couple times just to get all the nuance.

But for this one, spies and lovers and angry mothers come together in Alexandria. Some die by suicide. One is murdered by a mob for cross dressing. Nothing is as it seems. There's a war on the horizon.

62.Jupiter's Legacy book 1 - by Mark Millar & Frank Quitely - I'm reminded of Powers, the dumb tv show about superhero detectives. It was forgettable. Seriously, I don't even remember if they got to the end of the world chapter. It wasn't as violent a shift as Lucifer but it was worse. Lucifer at least knows it wants to be Castle but with the devil, and forget all that Mike Carrey writing in the graphic novel. Powers the television show preserves the superhero detective angle but completely 86's the superheroes as rock stars metaphor that made the comic so unique.

I speak of Powers because I watched Jupter's Legacy. I actually kind of liked Jupiter's Legacy. It was a sad imitation of The Boys but I definitely kept watching. I liked it enough to be curious about the source material. And that's where I realized how much they fucked with the adaptation. And not in a good way. In a very bad way. They took an interesting story about growing up and dealing with your parent's legacy and turned it into a lazy soap opera. It should have been called Jupiter's Boring Children.

Granted the entire series (books 1 & 2 or 3 & 4 if you go by Star Wars prequel numbering) is 10 issues. They made 8 episodes of a television show and they wanted more seasons. If they followed the story pattern of the book they would have been barely stretching it out to 2 seasons. They should have done that. Instead of 2 great seasons of television, they gambled on getting multiple seasons. Instead they got one mediocre season where the one character turns out to be the villain in the last episode.

So why do I love this comic so much, so much that I'm actually angry at the television show? Because it's actually about the LEGACY of these characters. Oh sure it begins like the television show. The older heroes have kids who are all celebrities. There are shenanigans involve their kids including the daughter whose a party girl and drug addict and the son whose an entitled loser. They even have the origin story which is takes up most of the show (and is actually why I kept watching).

And then in issue 3 (of 5), the brother of the main superhero FUCKING KILLS THE MAIN CHARACTERS. I mean the old superhero and his wife who are worried about their kids while being the guardians of the world. They just fucking die. And damn it's brutal.

So instead of being a soap opera about old superheroes and their kids in some cheap knockoff of The Boys, the book actually lives up to its title by taking up the story of the drug addict daughter, her spawn of supervillain boyfriend and their kid years later. Hiding out. Trying to live ordinary lives and doing the Clark Kent act complete with making sure that their son looks like a complete loser in sports, academics, etc. (even though he's not very good at hiding since he keeps running off whenever there's a major emergency in order to save people - an observation made by his classmate who practically orders him to go be a superhero like everyone knows). These two issues are silly and glorious with great character beats that prove once again that Mark Millar is NOT just an edgelord writer. Comparisons between Millar and Ennis are inevitable but when it comes to choosing between edgy and sincere, Millar will often choose sincere. Ennis never will and in your face bullshit is kind of Ennis' thing (something that I loved in my 20s but can't fully commit to these days).

Of course the book ends on a "let's go save the world" from her uncle and weak brother but getting there is what elevates this book above a violent deconstruction.

I'm a sucker for stories about growing up and taking responsibility. If only the damn show had seen the value in that. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 60 - Fuck you Eleanor Davis [Oct. 6th, 2021|11:22 pm]
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60.The Hard Tomorrow by Eleanor Davis - There is so much to hate about this graphic novel. The protagonists are hippies where she is part of a protest group and he deals weed. And they are supposed to be building a house but they never build that house. There's the implication that babies make everything better with that tacked on epilogue of her giving birth and three pages of an ugly baby (complete with a dedication at the beginning to the author's new baby - so yay for ugly babies?) Cue the "pregnant women are smug" song. There's the plot where the protest group is broken up even though they aren't doing much besides marches and they don't even let bystanders vandalize everything. This is not the kind of protest group that gets arrested. This is the kind of protest group that gets permits and uses off duty cops for security. There's the obnoxious woker than thou friend who is even more judgmental than everyone else. There's also a bit with a cop that is nice to the protagonist but then later that same cop beats up her friends.

The part where the protagonist is a caretaker for an old lady is kind of sweet but if that's her sole source of income there's no way that she's buying food. Caregivers get paid minimum wage. I know this from trying to get them to help my mom.

But the part that really pisses me, the part that turns this book from shitty to unforgivable is the protest against Sarin Gas (which the U.S. is now just manufacturing and selling in violation of all international treaties because when you give us President Zuckerberg why not go all the way into bullshit) and one of the signs indicates that Israel gassed Gaza.

This Nazi bitch writer wrote a scenario where Israel just outright committed the worst war crime short of genocide - one that Assad and Saddam Hussein barely got away with - to Gaza. Yes, Israel ends up killing civilians but if anyone knows anything about Israel they would know that Israel actually makes an effort to minimize civilian casualties (not that it matters to the people that insist on calling Israel Palestine as they believe that all military moves by Israel are war crimes. They even wanted to defund the Iron Dome which is a purely defensive program that stops Hamas from murdering children with missiles. And yeah, fuck Thought Slime for just outright stating that the Iron Dome kills children without even researching it. Because Israel bad. No matter what).

Do I have to make the damn qualifier that I don't think that Israel is perfect and that it can do a lot more to limit settlements and make life bearable for the people in the occupied territories?

But Eleanor Davis, Nazi Shit, is just assuming that there's a scenario where Israel is going to buy sarin gas from the United States and use it to kill thousands in Gaza indiscriminately. Because that fits her shitty worldview. When protest groups try to shout down Israeli scholars who talk about minimizing civilian casualties as Zionist Propagandists why not just assume that they won the propaganda wars and that Israel is evil enough to gas civilians.

There's also a conspiracy theorist who seems reasonable in a way that only a handwringing antisemitic leftist like Eleanor Davis could make. He's silly with his guns and his paranoia. That's all. He's just silly. ANd then then hippie dude shoots a gun in the air and accidentally kills him (so there's one joke in this boring ass book).

Anyhow, this is a shitty book with crap illustrations about privileged white people being privileged and pretending that they are as important as BLM with a "happy ending" where ugly babies make things better. If it didn't have that blatant antisemitic illustration, I would have been more than happy to forget about it. But Eleanor Davis is an antisemitic piece of shit so that sucked. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 56-59 - Fucking Finally Done Reading this Gibbon book [Oct. 6th, 2021|10:50 pm]
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56. The History of the Decline and Fall of the Roman Empire vol 1 by Edward Gibbon - HOly fuck this took forever. I might even be breaking my own rule because I'm pretty sure I started reading this in 2020 so it's not just books read in 2021. But since it took me 9 fucking months out of the year, I'm pretty damn happy to be done with it. Not saying it's not a bad read so much as it just took forever and there were points where he was showing his 18th century bias. His history of Xianity was tedious but it's interesting to find out that Julian the Apostate wanted to rebuild the Temple. Not because he liked Jews so much as he wanted to piss off the Christians. He couldn't oppress them but he could piss them off. Also the Arians were powerful at one point. They even repressed the Nicene Creed proponents. So that's fun. The book ends with Theodosius taking over Constantinople and the Goths are barely a problem. So I guess all the really wild stuff I remember from the abridged version is in later volumes. The emperors seemed more stable this time out. I remember more of them getting killed along with their families as the Goths sacked Rome (which always amuses because Goths). So yeah. Rome. It went Christian and things really began to unravel.

57. Lovesickness by Junji Ito - Oh nice and creepy. The pictures of the ghost girl dripping in blood and screaming I LOVE YOU!!!! is totally relatable. It does feel like another Tomie with the creepy dude driving everyone to suicide or worse. Even the seemingly innocuous advice like "come back with a more interesting problem" leads to massive chaos with the woman getting pregnant and then killing her lover's children. So creepy. Then there's the strange hikizuri siblings which seems like Ito's attempt to be outright funny instead of funny in a terrifying way. In the first one they give a guy a heart attack by convincing him that their sister burned herself to death. She's very annoyed with them. And that's it. The second one has the dumb brother pretending to be possessed by their father to get the older brother to give him respect. I laughed.

58. On Great Writing (on the Sublime) by Longinus - typical stuff. He talked about perfect style and then argues that imperfection over makes the work memorable. Not bad but mostly interesting for how much it talks about Greek poetry in the 1st century CE.

59.Black Hammer Age of Doom part 1 by Jeff Lemire & Sean Ormston - So this is one of those books that ends up with everyone finding out that they are in a virtual simulation on a spaceship. That was pretty much where it was leading because the mystical stuff seemed too convoluted with the superhero characters trapped in a weird village and Black Hammer 2 (her father is dead at this point) in Hell. I'm trying to read more Jeff Lemire books but it's difficult because I don't know where I'm supposed to come in. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 53-55 - Light Reading [Sep. 26th, 2021|08:57 pm]
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53. Celebrity Detox by Rosie O'Donnell - I can't really recommend this book. If you were around 10 years ago you might remember Rosie O'Donnell briefly made The View interesting, but it doesn't have much to do with current events except for O'Donnell feuding with Donald Trump who exploded when she said that he was a failed businessman (oh thank G-d that's not current). But most of it is a little unfinished. She's still with the wife that she would leave before gay marriage was legalized (legalized in San Francisco, thrown out by California, a few years before it became the law of the land). She was still on the View when the book ended with an unpleasant argument with Barbara Walters who was trying to both sides with Trump and O'Donnell (so others have learned that there's no middle ground with Trump). But O'Donnell would leave the view after a blowout and that story isn't in here. So this book is fine but if I hadn't been reading a bunch of heavy books I wouldn't have enjoyed this one at all.

54.Komi Can't Communicate vol 3 by Tomohito Oda - I love the way that he draws eyes. I didn't notice that manga really changes the eyes to suit the mood. This is subtle in the Spiderman comics where the costume eyes change shape but the way that the eyes turn into black dots whenever Komi is uncomfortable just makes me laugh every time. Also love the jokes about how Komi gets along fine with family members who also never talk.

55. Super Giant Monster Time by Jeff Burk - After following Jeff Burk on Facebook for years I must say this is quintessential Jeff with the punks, the aliens that turn the people into punks, the giant monsters and the super cat that flies around attacking everything. It's written in the Choose Your Own Adventure format with several hidden endings. And I'm happy it's Jeff because the last time I read a Bizarro Choose Your Own Adventure it was Cameron Pierce and that guy really loves rape jokes. But Jeff is more happy with giant carrots and killer cats. Also there are almost a dozen endings that you can't get to by playing fair. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books Read in 2021 # 51 & 52 - Really got to take these big graphic novels back to the library [Sep. 14th, 2021|12:24 am]
Tim Lieder
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51. Sweet Tooth by Jeff Lemire & others - So this is the graphic novel that they based the Netflix show on. And it's really good with the old guy being more of a Clint Eastwood type. The main revelation at the end about Sweet Tooth having been grown in a lab (and probably the cause of that pandemic that killed everyone) comes from him not having a navel, but the other characters do not get the same level of attention as they do on the show. So it's more about Sweet Tooth and the old man who betrays him. He doesn't betray Sweet Tooth in the show which is interesting. He just gets taken out of commission. Anyhow, beautiful artwork and nothing much else to say about it. If you like the show, you'll like the book. And vice versa.

52. Doomsday Clock by Geoff Johns & Gary Frank - Well this was a fucking mess. I guess I see what Geoff Johns was trying to do but why is he the major movie producer behind the DCEU if he also has a gig writing these comics. Everything I've read about him makes him sound like the Jim Shooter of DC comics. Kevin Feige is a movie guy. Geoff Johns is a comic book writer of nominal talent who fucks around with other people's characters with varying degrees of success (I kind of like his Teen Titans run) who should be way too busy with the writing to get involved in WW84 and the Whedon Cut (boo! hiss! #releasethesnyderverse)

So anyhow, this comic was here to introduce the Watchmen characters into the DC universe with a little more hubris than they did with their prequels and the conceit of Dr. Manhattan starting it all up. There's a new Rorschach who is being manipulated by Adrian Veidt. THere's the COmedian who shoots a bunch of villains hanging out with the Joker. Firestorm gets fucked over. And there's a whole lot of Meta. Superman keeps getting retconned. Dr. Manhattan erases the Golden Age heroes but then brings them back at the end. There are a couple of clown based villains who are spared the deaths of Dr. Manhattan because he likes that they have a kid that will later be raised by the SIlk Spectre and Nite Owl.

And the meta aspects are interesting, but all the while I kept thinking what they would have been like if someone who actually got the characters was writing them. Not Alan Moore who would never do it, but someone who doesn't totally change Dr. Manhattan's time cognition to give him free will. And when the whole thing ends with Dr. Manhattan establishing the MegaVerse or MetaVerse or whatever it's called, it's pretty depressing that Johns thinks that there will be major crisis events happening every couple years for the next 30 years of DC lore.

It's interesting but also messy. And doesn't quite get Dr. Manhattan. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 48 - 50 - Rosh Hashana reading [Sep. 13th, 2021|11:22 pm]
Tim Lieder
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48. Slayer Repentless by Jon Schnepp & Guiu Vilanova - So this comic book is a music video. Like it started out as a music video and then someone wrote a comic book about all the people in the music video, a little before they got into the music video and then had that big fight. Basically it's Nazis vs rednecks & bikers (yes, there's a possibility that these guys wouldn't be on the same side) in a small town that doesn't get wifi. Or internet. But there are brothers involved. One brother is a repentant Nazi with a fridged wife whose corpse he takes to the small town and the other brother is the Nazi who decided to kill his brother. Anyhow, it's fairly predictable but I like the art. And the pictures of the comic book artists and band signing copies at a convention are fun.

49. Ascender vol 1: The Haunted Galaxy by Jeff Lemire & Dustin Nguyen - This is a beautifully illustrated and colored comic book with some seriously elegaic undertones as the world has moved on from the characters and all the robots are dead. Now evil wizards control everything including a major evil wizard called Momma who consults with her mothers. FIrst chapter so I'm not sure where it's going but I think it's all about getting rid of the evil magicians. It's a sequel to Descender.

50. Half the Blood of Brooklyn by Charlie Huston - I remember loving the Erasing All Signs of Death book but not remembering anything beyond the character beat of the protagonist telling the scary gangster outright that he does not ride in buses (later on you find out that he was on a bus when a terrorist attack happened. And he saved the gangster's daughter). So the writing is pretty great. It moves along but I don't remember much else and I doubt I would remember anything about this book except for the fact that it's a gangster book with vampires and the main villains are chasidic Jews who go on just a little too long about being from the rapist sect of the Tribe of Benjamin (see the end of Judges for that story - it's really fucked up and the main point is that Israel needed a king to keep this nasty shit from happening again). Anyhow the whole thing does work in the noir detective genre with the conspiracies and mysteries piling up until the end when they seem to fall apart with really simple explanations about how the Jews were the ones that killed that blood supplier because they didn't like the Manhattan vampires muscling in on their territory. And the protagonist starts a war. So the back cover where he's preventing a war - nope.

I will read more books in the series but I always notice that when I read another book of this kind by the same author I feel let down. Like I know all the tricks and if I read an earlier book I'm going to know where it's going since characters keep eluding to the fates of past characters. This series might be the exception. After all, it's more noir detective than urban fantasy and I can read noir detective books by the same author. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 47 - Making Comics [Sep. 1st, 2021|07:57 pm]
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47. Making Comics by Scott McCloud - Like with Understanding Comics, I may have to read this one again. In fact, I now am thinking about expressions, setting, transitions and style in comics so much that my brain is starting to hurt. It's like when Every Frame a Painting talks about the four quadrants of the scene in Drive and how they influence the viewer. It's not something you think about right away. It's not like with Red Letter Media pointing out that the one second scene of Darth Vader's helmet going onto his bare head is an important character beat - something that you might not think about but totally makes sense. No this is more the things that you never think about as a reader when reading comic books. I certainly don't think about these things.

They work on me, but unlike McCloud I am not outright analyzing them and now I feel like I should. The visual medium of comics makes them very unique. The way that the artist leads you to feeling and thinking certain things works as well.

ANyhow, Scott McCloud blew my mind to the point that I can't even really engage with the text in a meaningful way. I did love his argument that Manga has greatly influenced modern comics because that's a different way of story telling with its own visual cues. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 45 & 46 - Graphic NOvels that need to go back to the library [Aug. 25th, 2021|08:09 pm]
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45.Komi Can't Communicate by Tomohito Oda - The entry of Ren Yamai into this series is the definite adrenaline kick that I didn't know it needed. I actually noticed her in the first volume since she threatened the protagonist in such a crazy way, but in this one the depth of her obsession with Komi is insane and hilarious. The main joke is that she sees Komi as the most wonderful and ideal woman in the world but Komi doesn't talk to her and has never talked to her and the whole premise of the book is the fact that Komi is too shy to even talk to her best friends unless absolutely necessary. But since Komi is also the prettiest girl in the high school no one even notices just how silent she is all the time. Anyhow Ren Yamai kidnaps Tandano and locks him in her room because she's offended that Komi would even talk to such a basic dude. There's other stuff but Komi is definitely a draw. Still confusing that she can only speak by writing down the words but she doesn't have an online presence. But I think that's just something you have to ignore.

46.Paper Girls 1 by Brian K Vaughan & Cliff Chiang - I don't like Y: The Last Man. I tried to like it. I really did, but even on the second reading in anticipation of the show, I can't get into it. Too many coincidences. Too many straw feminists. He's trying too hard to say something deep about human nature but failing. By contrast, I really like this one. I don't know if he's trying to do anything besides a time traveling pulp science fiction story where teenagers from the future are severely disfigured. The 1986 time period means that when a future teenager refers to his boyfriend one of the characters acts disgusted (oh the reaction to Heathers and its rampant homophobia - sorry that's just pretty accurate to the time) and the one ends with a cliffhanger of a character running into her future self. And it all begins with teenage girls trying to make a living delivering papers. I like it. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books Read in 2021 # 43 & 44 - God Stuff [Aug. 25th, 2021|07:18 pm]
Tim Lieder
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43. Mablbim: The Patriarchs translated (with notes) by Tzvi Faier - Malbim was a 19th century rabbi and his commentary was mostly pretty great. However, I'm remembering the one about how Esav absorbed Rivka's menstrual blood. It's one of those awful commentaries that you are going to get when you are primed to note the "scientific" perspective. Ramban had a book on how the Torah is super intelligent, but his main examples were how the Torah knew all the bullshit scientific facts of the 12th century. So what else about this thing? Well, it's the parshas from Lech Lecha (Abram going off to his calling) to Toldot (Jacob leaving to escape Esav). Text was in HEbrew and English with commentary on almost every line.

The story that really grabbed me this time was Sodom. Holy fuck, that's a rapey story. Doesn't help that Malbim and Faier are both pretty cool with Lot's oldest daughter raping him. I'm even more annoyed with my confirmation pastor telling us that Sodom was a city of homosexuals BUT there were serious hospitality issues (and then he stole stories from one of those monsters that Theseus encounters before the Minotaur with everyone being stretched or cut up to fit on a bed). Was also annoyed with the Biblical Hebrew professor who also read this story as homophobic. Do these people think that Oz is a gay romance with all the prison rape?

So I was more impressed with the pshat. The only commentary that stood out for me was the really dumb one about menstrual blood but the commentary was still generally solid.

44. The Godmakers by Frank Herbert - The very first Borges story I ever read was one where he goes into the future and meets himself on the brink of suicide. His future self tells him that he tried to write under a pseudonym but every called those books bad Borges ripoffs. The main point that every writer eventually ends up plagiarizing himself. Which is still better than the late stage of the scientist who starts spouting off stupid shit in a field that is not his own. (including Judy Mikovits who went from celebrated AIDS researcher to shit antivaxxer - https://timlieder1.medium.com/the-tragedy-of-judy-mikovits-fc1721855499)

Even though the plot initially is about a short tempered man checking out a potentially rebellious planet, it quickly turns into Herbert's greatest hits. Every planet is full of hidden soldiers. He has magical healing powers. His mother is part of a secret society of women who actually run the empire (through their husbands of course - a lot of "classic" science fiction could imagine interplanetary travel but not women leaders or in many cases women with actual personalities). Oh yeah, he's got psi powers that come from another branch. There's a major intergalactic religion that is just Islam with the serial number barely scratched off.

We even get the "deep thoughts" chapter headers. Mostly quotes from characters, but unlike when I read Dune I recognized a bunch of those quotes from Pirke Avos. Maybe if he studied it more the last couple Dune books where suddenly JEWS show up. That's another matter and if I ever reread Heretics of Dune I will go on and one about how silly it is that every other religion in this future is an amalgamation of current faiths as they would look in thousands of years but suddenly JEWS show up. Just long enough for a rabbi's daughter to totally join the bene gesserit.

By the time our hero becomes a god I marveled at how lazy Frank Herbert was getting. Had someone else wrote it, he would have tested that "you can't copyright an idea" standard. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books Read in 2021 # 42 - I considered this guy a mentor? [Aug. 15th, 2021|01:44 am]
Tim Lieder
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42. Drama by Michael Hemmingson - I wanted to read Hemmingson after Raymond Carver just because I know that Gordon Lish is one of Hemmingson's heroes and in This Other Eden, he even included a Gordon Lish type character as a creative writing teacher. As much as I like the doomed drunk characters of Hemmingson (and Hemingway, Carver, Bukowski, etc., etc) they can get old. Still I was in the mood so I read this book and fucking hell, does Hemmingson even like sex?

I'm asking because this is one of his erotic books for Blue Moon and so a quarter of it are sex scenes but gross sex scenes, like ATM and just in case you think that it's like a porno where everyone has many enemas before the butt fucking, Hemmingson has to say specifically that they are eating shit. And he really loves the shit eating. Like almost as soon as the "other woman" enters the picture (one is named Kristine and the other one is Kathleen - I think - or Katherine? I forget) there's massive shit eating in order to distinguish the "bad woman" from the "good woman". The good woman is the play director that the playwright protagonist starts up with. The bad woman is the slutty one that his good woman doesn't approve of. And since he has a lot of sex (described clincally and not erotically at all). And the bad woman fucks everyone before she gets to him. Then she gets insanely jealous.

So sex, shit eating and sex. And by the end we get some serious racism. But also the good woman ends up with a dependable guy who then fucks the bad woman - proving that everyone is a scumbag. But then the racism that's not just cringe racism like when white people try rapping but outright large black rapist racism. The bad woman ends up with him after our hero breaks up with her and then he gets all his friends to rape her.

None of this is erotic. In fact the only part that's erotic is when the characters talk about their other fuck buddies.

Anyhow after that rape scene, the bad woman gets the playwright protagonist to come to her motel so she can tell him that she's dying. Then he leaves and gets in a car accident and dies. The last 60 pages is a bullshit play where Timmy (fuck off with using the name) fucks a lot of people.

There's no joy to this and no real passion. Michael was a sad fuck who wrote a ton of stuff. SOme of it was really good. And at one point I admired him for churning out a lot of books - like three a year - but his characters are sad sacks and his cocaine death in Tijuana was appropriate. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 39-41 - Ok, let's get these back to the library [Jul. 28th, 2021|03:15 pm]
Tim Lieder
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39. Komi Can't Communicate vol 1 by Tomohito Oda - I'm actually quite fond of this book although it's got some strange relationship with modern technology. Mostly due to the fact that Komi is so shy that she can't even make small talk but she can write down the words. Which brings up the fact that she should have an online presence. The introvert/extrovert dynamic almost reverses online. My online presences is all over the place but see me in person and I'm fairly unassuming. Granted that's a lot of ADHD where I'm not very comfortable around neurotypical people, but also I'm shy. Way back when I was first blogging on livejournal, I surprised people by being nice in person. Anyhow if Komi can't talk to people except to write things down, why doesn't she blog or use social media? But beyond that this is a sweet book about a very shy girl wanting to make friends and how her reticence makes people think that she's stuck up. Also there's a trans character so bonus.

40. The Society of Timid Souls or How to be Brave by Polly Morland - This is one of those light tourism of a dynamic books. Morland was a journalist for years so in this book she applies all of her experience to the topic of fear and bravery. So she can talk about performance anxiety, genocide and soldiers. It's an interesting take on many topics. It's one of those books that you enjoy reading and forget about in a few months. But the material about the genocide in Bosnia is seriously not going to go away (especially since those 1/6 motherfuckers were ready to start it up here).

41. Frankenstein: The Graphic Novel adapted by Jason Cobley and Declan Shalvey - SHalvey has a credit for line work. Not artist. Not pencils. Line work. Maybe it's a British thin but it feels appropriate that the artist would get very little credit. THe whole book is perfunctory with a Classical Comics label slapped on so it's like those 60s classic illustrated comics that were more important as Cliff NOtes than actual entertainment. I also forget that Victor has another brother besides William. http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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Books read in 2021 # 36-38 - Very Meh [Jul. 11th, 2021|10:57 pm]
Tim Lieder
36. Road to Riverdale by Various - So I really don't know the purpose of this book beyond a tie-in to the tv show. These aren't tv show plot ARchie comics. THey are various Archie comics that kind of feel more adult because recent Archie comics have shifted into modern soap operas. The only one of note is the Betty & Veronica one where they seem like they are fighting over Veronica's dad trying to buy Pops but instead they are working together.

37. The Coffin Quilt by Ann Rinaldi - This one is about the Hatfield McCoy feud and it's pretty entertaining but it skips over a lot of the carnage and the perspective character is a younger sister who sees things and comments but is not a major part. The one part that I liked was the ending where the sister is so sick of Roseanna who kind of started the whole feud by trying to run off with a Hatfield that she doesn't even bother to deliver that Hatfield's note because fuck this noise. But almost all of the deaths take place off camera. It's pretty light

38. THe Comic Book Story of Professional Wrestling by Aubrey Sitterson - I had high hopes for this one and certainly the beginning that traces professional wrestling back to the carnivals and sideshows, but it's too busy going "ok, this was neat" instead of delving into any one period. And toward the end the fact that it references concussions and brain damages without really saying much. It's like "these guys have holes in their brains. BTW here's a bit about Vince McMahaon..." http://www.patreon.com/timlieder
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